Krista:
No post for 10/13
Ray of light
This posting was very easy to read. Everything from your structure and concepts flowed nicely throughout the entire post. You answered the question thoroughly giving detail information to support your ideas. I think you are great writer. I would have like to see more of what you thought on the topic of people not agreeing with the natural perspective of homosexuality.
Aubrie:
The science of dating
Your posting was organized well. I liked how you referred to Disney characters to explain true love fairy tales, those will always be great movies! I would have liked you to relate more with article in explaining your ideas. Do not get me wrong you did relate to the article but in your posting, you had good information, I just would have like to read more into to it. Overall, it was a good well-written posting.
Jungle to Jacksonville
I love this posting. You had so much information that it kept me intrigued throughout the whole time I was reading. I think you used the quotes very well and in places that supported your ideas. I like how you kept open mind to what is natural and what isn’t when relating to animals, human and homosexuality. Very good job.
Jade:
Happy every after
Your post was well written. From beginning to end all the information was structured very well. They way you used quotes to support your ideas really fell in and gave me a better understanding to your concept. I agree that we grow up thinking there is a prince charm out in the world but what we think is completely different to reality. Good job, really liked your post.
To be or not to be.
This post was interesting. I liked how you structured your concept and ideas. I like how you explained the authors approach to the subject and than proceeded to explain with your ideas. The quotes that you added in return helped support your ideas. Overall, this post was well written. Good job
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Hey Monique, just wanted to thank you for all of the reviews you've done for me this unit. they have been so helpful and have given me more confidence in my writing!! I appreciate it! Thanks again, Krista
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